March 31st, 2008
Lonely Places Page 12
Without being able to switch camera shots every few seconds sometimes it is difficult to convey the story the way the author meant to, but I am doing my best and at least I can follow what is going on. 
Rich.
April 13th, 2008 at 3:27 am
As long as you’re tracking left to right, top to bottom, with both the panel and the word balloon placement, it’s cool.
I especially like the way you’ve inset the two smaller panels into the bigger background one. It’s a subtle way to imply quick cuts by the camera, telling us important details but not slowing down the reader’s train of thought.
The less bumps on the track, the better, and the reader can enjoy the ride. No worries on this page, Hardcopi, you got it.